как правильно написать заключение для задания IELTS writing task 2 / How to Write Effective IELTS Conclusion


To tell the truth, the conclusion is the easiest paragraph to write because in many ways you are just using ideas you have already mentioned in your introduction and main body paragraphs. However, this is the last thing the examiner will read and it is, therefore, crucial that you finish strongly.
You will probably not have much time remaining when you are writing your conclusion so it is very important that you practice them and learn how to write them quickly. I will show you how below. 

 

IELTS Conclusion Quick Tips

  1. Never write any new ideas in your conclusion. A conclusion should always simply restate the ideas you have in the rest of the essay. New ideas should be in the main body and not in the conclusion.
  2. Make sure you answer the question in the conclusion. The conclusion should state what you think about the question and make it clear how you feel about the issue.
  3. Vary your language. Just because you are restating the ideas you have in the rest of your essay, doesn’t mean you use the same language. Instead, you show the examiner you have a wide vocabulary by paraphrasing.
  4. Don’t try to include everything. You are not required to go into detail, you have already done that in your main body paragraphs. Instead, you will just summarise your main points.
  5. Always write the conclusion. It is very difficult to get a good score in task 2 if you haven’t finished your essay with a conclusion. Even if you are running out of time, make sure you write one.


Linking Phrases

First, you should start with an appropriate linking phrase. Some are better than others. Here are some examples:

  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
  • In conclusion
  • To conclude

Finally isn’t really suitable because it indicates that you are making a final point and therefore a new idea. Finally belongs in the main body of your essay, not the conclusion.

In a nutshell is too informal and we should never use it in IELTS conclusions.

In general tells the reader you are going to talk generally about a topic. This is not what we are going to do in our conclusion and we should therefore not use it.

In conclusion and to conclude are the only two linking phrases you should use to start your conclusion. They tell the reader exactly what the paragraph is about and they are formal. You will only write one conclusion, so simply pick one and stick with it.

How to Write a Good Conclusion

There are two elements to a good conclusion:

  1. Summarising the main points of your essay
  2. Varying your vocabulary by paraphrasing

Luckily we have already stated our main points in the introduction, so all we have to do is look back at the conclusion and paraphrase this.

 

Let’s look at some examples:

/// Practical skills such as money management should be taught in high school. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and real life examples. ///


 

Introduction

It is argued that students should be taught real-life skills, like how to look after money. I agree that this should be part of the curriculum.  This essay will demonstate that educating  young people about everyday competencies will benefit them later in life, while not teaching how to manage money at an early age can lead to dangerous consequences in adulthood. 

We have completed an effective introduction by doing three things:

  1. Paraphrasing the question
  2. Stating our opinion
  3. Outlining what we will talk about in the rest of the essay or in other words, the main points we're using to support our opinion.
     

Conclusion

In conclusion, this essay supports the idea that teenagers ought to be taught functional subjects like financial planning because it helps them in adulthood, while lacking of education related to these topics can have serious consequences. 

So all we have done is restate our opinion and included our main supporting points. However, we have not simply copied all the words, we have used synonyms and paraphrasing to vary our language.

Note that we have repeated some words. Paraphrasing does not mean change every single word. If you cannot think of a way to change every word, feel free to repeat that word. In general, you should try to vary your vocabulary as much as possible, but it is often impossible to change every single word. Better to repeat a word accurately than change it to something that is wrong.

Here are the paraphrases we used:

This essay supports- This essay agrees

should- ought to

students- teenagers

functional subjects- real-life skills

look after money- financial planning

later in life- adulthood


Let’s look at another example:

///  Modern technology has a big impact on our environment. Some say that people should adopt a simple lifestyle to solve this problem, while others argue that technology itself should provide a solution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.  ///

 

Introduction

Contemporary advances have a serious effect on the planet. While I appreciate that critics may hope that people will shun the latest developments, I believe that technology itself can give us an answer.  This essay will first discuss how not using electronics is unfeasible, followed by a discussion of how science is now coming up with ways to reverse global warming and pollution. 

This introduction does three basic things:

1. Paraphrases the question

2. States opinion

3. Outlines what the essay will discuss
 

Conclusion

In conclusion, this essay acknowledges that technological progress does jeopardise the planet, but cutting-edge discoveries can actually halt and even heal this destruction. 

Again, all we have done is to repeat what we said in the introduction using paraphrasing.

 


Adding a Prediction or Recommendation to Our Conclusion 

We can also add a prediction (what we think will happen) or a recommendation (what we think should happen) to our conclusion.

This is totally optional. I teach students how to write these because it allows them to write something at the end of the essay if they are worried about not making it to 250 words. Only use these if you have no other option to get you over the word count. 

Here are our two previous conclusions with one added sentence:

In conclusion, this essay supports the idea that teenagers ought to be taught functional subjects like financial planning because it helps them in adulthood and a lack of education related to these topics can have serious consequences. It is recommended that governments make this a compulsory part of the education system. 

In conclusion, this essay acknowledges that technological progress does jeopardise the planet, but cutting-edge discoveries can actually halt and even heal this destruction. It is predicted that climate change will be successfully tackled with such inventions.